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The Simplicity of Poetry
Contributed by
fragilestrength
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Wednesday, 18th August 2010 @ 03:01:56 PM in AEST
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Strolling through a garden at night
sketching the view
describing the smell
hearing the sound of your beating heart
all explained in an unequivocal sentence
The delicate breaking
of the fragile human soul,
which takes years to wear down,
and a few more to expose the break
can be described in half a page
The ability to fall in love
takes a second to maim
and takes a second more to embellish
all of this can be elucidated
in a single word- a single glance
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Re: The Simplicity of Poetry
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by UNORTHODOX on
Thursday, 19th August 2010 @ 02:49:52 PM AEST
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It shows that you were inspired when you wrote this passage
You aren't lacking talent when it comes to writting
nicely DONE
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Re: The Simplicity of Poetry
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by Deidra_Carmichael on
Thursday, 19th August 2010 @ 03:38:00 PM AEST
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Oh so very true. Poetry makes life worth living and you've shown it. Thank you for posting this wonderful write,
Deidra
P.S: "But these are written so that you may believe that Jesus is the Christ. And that by believing you may have eternal life in His name."- John 20:31 |
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Re: The Simplicity of Poetry
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by unknown_utopia on
Friday, 20th August 2010 @ 01:44:10 PM AEST
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sketching the view....yes.
good flow
great topic. |
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Re: The Simplicity of Poetry
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by xanvier on
Thursday, 30th August 2012 @ 06:24:36 PM AEST
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poetry is the heart of the soul... the simplicity of the poetry can be anything that describes the heart of the soul... nicely done... describing it... nice and beautiful poetry...
---xanvier--- |
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