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Improving and trying
Contributed by
voyage
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Wednesday, 18th August 2010 @ 11:23:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Just now and then you fall out and cry
Until your life is over you'll only try
To fix youlsef and them
In turn finding nothing but mayhem
Full of feelings yet returned
Your time is being spent
Making sense of all we've done
Belive me all just begun.
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2010-08-18 11:23:28]
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Re: Improving and trying
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by northernlights on
Wednesday, 18th August 2010 @ 01:24:16 PM AEST
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| I like this this is my view of the world too and I feel like a continuous process and I think we all try to fix ourselves and others in one long continual effort just for it all to begin again well written |
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Re: Improving and trying
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by UNORTHODOX on
Saturday, 6th November 2010 @ 12:43:34 AM AEST
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A swift insight on life as we know it
this passage was modest and clearly worded
wisdom take form as well
nicely written
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Re: Improving and trying
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by UNORTHODOX on
Saturday, 6th November 2010 @ 12:43:38 AM AEST
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A swift insight on life as we know it
this passage was modest and clearly worded
wisdom take form as well
nicely written
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