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Confusion

Contributed by TundraHydra on Friday, 18th April 2003 @ 08:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

I know the confusion is over my head
When I can't remember the words I just said
My mind and body feel like lead
Slow to understand what is going on in my head
How many times, these tears I've shed
And watched the blood I bled
Crying for strength, alone in my bed
The only strength I know are the words you fed
But I don't understand you or the words you said
Listening to you is like riding downhill through a blizzard on a sled
I want to know what's going on around me
Stop clouding my vision so that I can't see
You're the source of my confusion, so get away from me
After you leave, the blizzard will clear
And I can use the reins of the sled to steer
You kept me in the dark by using my fear
My fear of people and society
Once you are gone and away
I might be able to live my life my way

Copyright © TundraHydra ... [ 2003-04-18 08:05:00]
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Re: Confusion (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 18th April 2003 @ 12:23:58 PM AEST
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I love it!! Its sad yet full of a great strength you have deep inside of you. Great write. Good luck and best wishes too you!!
Michelle

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