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A heartless woman
Contributed by
Rasberry
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Wednesday, 18th August 2010 @ 07:09:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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She is cold.
She'll love and take it back like an object loaned.
Cruel,cunning,selfish and more.
She cares only for herself and the like that runs through her veins.
Her heart to others is deprived of the emotion affection like the dessert is of rain.
Her eyes are open but she is blinded,
She needs to see that those who try with her will not forever be.
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Rasberry
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2010-08-18 07:09:06]
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Re: A heartless woman
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by Jameskistner on
Wednesday, 18th August 2010 @ 07:48:57 AM AEST
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| I wish i could say the exact same about the girl i'm on and off with. I didn't used to be the kind to get attached, she broke through my walls. Now no matter how she seems to treat me i keep coming back. Thank you for this post |
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Re: A heartless woman
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by mehuel on
Wednesday, 18th August 2010 @ 12:43:04 PM AEST
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| "deprived of emotions .... like dessert is of rain".. Good expression... Nice write.. |
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Re: A heartless woman
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by polaris773 on
Thursday, 19th August 2010 @ 01:56:19 PM AEST
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| short yet still full of expresion nice work |
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Re: A heartless woman
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by unknown_utopia on
Friday, 20th August 2010 @ 01:52:17 PM AEST
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Women are evil
not all of them
but
some are heart ripping beings,
and yes
don't hang on to long. |
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