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The Poet
Contributed by
Moss
on
Tuesday, 17th August 2010 @ 09:20:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
obsession
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Open your soul and mind to see
what words should and will come to be,
listen to the tune of your fast beating heart
which tells you what words will play a part
in a story which breaks the line between,
what is dreamt and what is seen,
but sometimes your soul delves to far
and real and fake aren't far apart,
are you alive and are you dead
who keeps whispering in your head
to write these words of golden dreams,
or were they all about a sad reality
Moss, PLEASE: To help keep this site INTERACTIVE, please read and comment on at least 3 poems for each one you submit. This does not include commenting on your own work
As of this posting, you have posted 8 poems and have only 1 interactive comment. You should actually read and commented on 24 works by other members, not 1. BEFORE posting another poem, please bring your comment level up to 24. Thank you.
Number of poems per author per 24 hours are limited depending on membership level and interactivity.
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Moss
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2010-08-17 21:20:40]
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Re: The Poet
(User Rating: 1 )
by Ravisada on
Tuesday, 17th August 2010 @ 09:57:28 PM AEST
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| Excellent. Well penned. |
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Re: The Poet
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by James_Roark on
Sunday, 22nd August 2010 @ 10:49:31 AM AEST
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| Very nicely done. |
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