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Sleepwalking
Contributed by
Chelea
on
Tuesday, 17th August 2010 @ 05:35:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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Restless as the tide my dreams
Dark gray days like that place in me
where no one goes and so it seems
I'm floating in an endless sea
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Re: Sleepwalking
(User Rating: 1 ) by Chamaron on
Wednesday, 18th August 2010 @ 10:37:40 AM AEST (User
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Short but expressive, a very good portrayal of a hopeless feeling. Good write. |
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