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Blindness
Contributed by
KMPMaster
on
Tuesday, 17th August 2010 @ 12:39:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Some people are blind by sight,
Some are by mind.
I have sight,
But my mind is blind.
What I see in life's game,
And what exist,
Is not the same.
So I run from the mist.
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Re: Blindness
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jameskistner on
Tuesday, 17th August 2010 @ 12:47:50 PM AEST (User
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Dunno if its what you intended, however in my mind i just about heard it as a rap. Have you tried putting your stuff to a beat or music? Good flow though! |
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