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our last time

Contributed by babigurl343 on Monday, 16th August 2010 @ 04:55:35 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

it was midnight when i snuck out, you were driving down the road
you stopped the car, and opened the door to let me in out of the cold
we stared for a bit as you drove, laughing all the way...
to an abandoned trailer, then i heard you say...
well here we are, our castle, its not much as you can see
but it our place of happiness to get away from our families
we danced to soft music, one of my favorite songs,
but i knew that the whole time we did this, it was still very wrong
then you kissed my lips...and then i kissed you back...
the kissing led to something more, as your hands ran over my back

i still have dreams about it...i thought you were the one...
but now i know the guy you are, you only wanted fun..
i wish the pain would stop..you were my greatest mistake...
you took something very valuable...and took my heart to stake...
but jerks may come and jerks may go..and i found someone else
and your no longer in my life..which i like..you only cared about yourself

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Re: our last time (User Rating: 1 )
by Jameskistner on Tuesday, 17th August 2010 @ 08:19:56 AM AEST
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Love how this tells the story. I have a good imatination too, you led the story with the right words til the end. I've been there, not word for word, lol. but great poem overall!

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