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Stones
Contributed by
navydocny
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Sunday, 15th August 2010 @ 06:18:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Where would her love be in the pitch of night?
Encased by wings of a star darkened moon
Too quick to bring to her thoughts which might
Fetch an adoration crudely hewn
Time, its sentence and the slow sweet pain
It is such that makes one languish in hold
Gathering her stones upon a desolate plain
Hoarding her treasure of love untold
What cloying lies this life does tell
Stealing stones gathered from her till
Latria once given a low death knell
Her love, once fire now elicits a chill
Time and circumstance, ally and foe
Educes a love which continues to grow
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Re: Stones
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by emystar on
Sunday, 15th August 2010 @ 05:08:00 PM AEST
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Very deep write.
Good work as always.
Hang tuff and keep on keeping on.
enjoy your time at home.
blessings, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Stones
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 16th August 2010 @ 07:07:59 AM AEST
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Some great lines in this, especially:
'Time, its sentence and the slow sweet pain'
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