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Emotional Totrue
Contributed by
unknown_utopia
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Saturday, 14th August 2010 @ 10:04:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Nobody told her
that she should be stronger
so she endures emotional torture
from a man made of stone,
exsisting in silence and denial
cause she thinks no one will understand
in the wind
her moans are twisting
and
it hurts to be alone.
Searching for reasons
the stench of a lifetime
only bring on false visions
making the Illusion forever last,
when someone finally told her
that love shouldn't be torture
she was so deep into disorder
all she could do was laugh.
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Re: Emotional Totrue
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by cashfan1 on
Sunday, 15th August 2010 @ 03:10:58 AM AEST
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| Nice words well expressed poetry. Very readable. Thanks for sharing. |
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Re: Emotional Totrue
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by TsunamiWaverider on
Sunday, 15th August 2010 @ 05:38:25 PM AEST
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Nice read.
Btw...ask the mods to fix the subject name...it's listed as 'Totrue' whereas i think you meant 'Torture'. |
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Re: Emotional Totrue
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by Jameskistner on
Tuesday, 17th August 2010 @ 08:37:36 AM AEST
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| Short and sweet but pretty deep. I like this one! Good poem |
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Re: Emotional Totrue
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 28th December 2010 @ 03:47:54 PM AEST
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she was so deep into disorder
all she could do was laugh. >>>>>
blessingss,
emy |
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