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Melting Maddness
Contributed by
unknown_utopia
on
Saturday, 14th August 2010 @ 09:37:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Silently screaming
alone
in my cell,
I got this eerie feeling
this is no nightmare....
evil voices are whispering
they're saying
I'm not visiting I belong here.
Something crazy
slips
into my mind
what if I was born to be down,
emotionally I melt
and I let go
as
the eyes in head
go
'round and 'round.
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unknown_utopia
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2010-08-14 21:37:50]
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Re: Melting Maddness
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by Daniellemarie on
Sunday, 15th August 2010 @ 05:02:36 PM AEST
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I like this alot very dark, almost creepy it really leaves an effect on me
-DanielleMarie- |
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Re: Melting Maddness
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by TsunamiWaverider on
Sunday, 15th August 2010 @ 05:40:53 PM AEST
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| :O :(( |
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Re: Melting Maddness
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by cashfan1 on
Monday, 16th August 2010 @ 01:41:45 AM AEST
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Absolutely brilliant!!
Well done, this is deep and full of darkness,
great stuff. |
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Re: Melting Maddness
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by Jameskistner on
Tuesday, 17th August 2010 @ 01:01:23 PM AEST
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| I used to work at a prison, this reminds me of something i would have read from one of the inmates. Good write though. |
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Re: Melting Maddness
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 28th December 2010 @ 03:55:40 PM AEST
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the eyes in head
go
'round and 'round.
Honestly I was going around-n round with the eyes and trying to imagine u in person like that.
Honestly I'm getting dizzy.
smiles,
emy |
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