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A dark shade of blue
Contributed by
Daniellemarie
on
Saturday, 14th August 2010 @ 01:02:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I pull the curtains closed again to embrace
a darker shade of me. Deep sea blue is
what I am, the darkest shade of blue I have
ever known. I play with my razorblades
and pop one too many, only to wake up
alive and still acheing from a wound
deep, deep, inside of me. A wound that
never really heals. I open up old cuts,
and make fresh ones as I go along.
As long as this heart of mine still beats per minute
I will never be relieved.
Copyright ©
Daniellemarie
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2010-08-14 13:02:36]
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Re: A dark shade of blue
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by emystar on
Saturday, 14th August 2010 @ 03:38:13 PM AEST
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So sad but u tell it so well.
Where have you been?
welcome back.
huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: A dark shade of blue
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by sachyboy on
Saturday, 14th August 2010 @ 04:12:11 PM AEST
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| Nicely written, really deep. Well done |
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Re: A dark shade of blue
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by unknown_utopia on
Saturday, 14th August 2010 @ 09:39:40 PM AEST
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good one
well done |
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Re: A dark shade of blue
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by cashfan1 on
Sunday, 15th August 2010 @ 09:18:00 AM AEST
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| Very deep and full of emotion. Beautifuly writen. Well done. |
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Re: A dark shade of blue
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by chrisdavid on
Monday, 16th August 2010 @ 12:56:32 AM AEST
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| A poem that holds a lot of emotion. You describe it well. |
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