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The Rain's Aromas
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
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Friday, 13th August 2010 @ 07:54:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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vapors suffocate;
metallic humidity,
tranforms to raw worms
Copyright ©
lesoleilnoire
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2010-08-13 19:54:09]
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Re: The Rain's Aromas
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by cashfan1 on
Saturday, 14th August 2010 @ 01:25:10 AM AEST
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| Wonderful! In those few brief words you capture and display your subject and draw in the reader. I am reading this and in my mind I am outside in a shower of rain. Superb writing. |
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Re: The Rain's Aromas
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by 2bpositive on
Saturday, 4th December 2010 @ 11:26:45 PM AEST
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| nice imagery, forcing you to think. |
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