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Perseid
Contributed by
sachyboy
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Friday, 13th August 2010 @ 04:06:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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As light bounces from cloud to cloud
The beauty of the stars transcend through
So peaceful under darkened skies
Incredible to view
A glimmer of hope in a turbulent time
A beacon of what could be
Splendour for the tired eyes
Of unrivalled serenity
Picturesque this calming still
While suns burn overhead
You'll see no tragedy whilst you sit here
Just wonderment, instead
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Re: Perseid
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 13th August 2010 @ 05:16:05 PM AEST
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Nicely written with some good description.
-Phil |
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Re: Perseid
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by lesoleilnoire on
Friday, 13th August 2010 @ 07:57:12 PM AEST
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| Beautiful--I can see the night sky through this piece. I also was watching the night sky last night and was amazed. Great poem! |
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Re: Perseid
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by northernlights on
Saturday, 14th August 2010 @ 01:09:49 AM AEST
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| Lovely poem well written |
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