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What I see is not what is
Contributed by
Avataar
on
Thursday, 12th August 2010 @ 09:04:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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I see anger,
but beneath it there is hurt
I see laziness
but beneath it there is illness
I see insensitivity
but beneath it there is fear of being hurt
I see indecisiveness
but beneath it is fear of accountability
I see control
but beneath it is insecurity
I see lies
but beneath it is the longing to be accepted
I see hate
but beneath it is the emptiness of never being loved
What I see is not what is.
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2010-08-12 09:04:03]
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Re: What I see is not what is
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by mehuel on
Thursday, 12th August 2010 @ 09:30:24 AM AEST
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| nice peice, speaks of such true words on human nature... Good one... |
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Re: What I see is not what is
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by cashfan1 on
Thursday, 12th August 2010 @ 10:40:32 AM AEST
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| Human nature in a nut shell. Well writen this, I like it very much. |
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Re: What I see is not what is
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by northernlights on
Friday, 13th August 2010 @ 01:33:55 PM AEST
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| Challenging write to look beyond what we initially see not always easy as we often have all the defence mechanisms you describe. well written |
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