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only get one
Contributed by
gr8tfulldead
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Wednesday, 11th August 2010 @ 01:29:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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When sight goes blind and When touch goes numb
When all senses fail and the darkness as come
Do not despair don’t try and run
What’s coming next might be fun
Life’s but a game that we all must play
It will show us the path, it will show us our way
The universe is magical, when its all said in done
So live life to the fullest, because you only get one.
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gr8tfulldead
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2010-08-11 01:29:35]
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Re: only get one
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by Poetic_Punk on
Wednesday, 11th August 2010 @ 05:53:37 AM AEST
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a few spelling errors etc but I can figure what you meant. at the heart of it i think this is about what it means to be happy, "So live life to the fullest, because you only get one." if there is one thing being a father has taught me its that there is enjoyment to be found in the simplest of things, if you can't find it your not looking hard enough. nice work!
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Re: only get one
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by allforyou on
Wednesday, 11th August 2010 @ 02:29:41 PM AEST
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When I read the title of this I immediately thought of the Family Guy episode
where Spiderman comes out out nowhere and says "everybody gets one."
Anyways, the message in this is obviously deep.
This is the only life we have, so make the most out of it. :D
-Kara |
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Re: only get one
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by sachyboy on
Saturday, 14th August 2010 @ 07:57:55 AM AEST
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| Nice work, really like the last two lines. |
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