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I tried my best, it's time for me to let go.

Contributed by losthergreeneyes on Tuesday, 10th August 2010 @ 10:05:54 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I've waited for so long,
I can't bare to wait any longer.
I ask to see you, but you turn the other cheek.
But when i leave is when you come around.
I can't keep doing this, this is a game i can't win.
Fought for so long, for something i believed in...
To have it run away, with my heart.
This endless road has now come to an end for me,
Cause no matter how hard you try, i will be blind.
I won't hear your voice, i won't smell your sweet scent,
Your beauty will no longer enter my eyes,
And memories of you will be erased.
When you cry for help, hope that someone else is brave enough..
Cause your super hero, is no longer plan B.
So save the drama, its your turn to see karma..
And you can watch your faith disappear.
I will leave with no words, no heart felt goodbye,
Cause when you do look for me, and you will..
I won't be able to see you.
So many times i needed you, you would not come around,
Only to have me there when you feel down.
You say you won't cry, but this really is goodbye,
There's only one way you can stop me now.
To find me, you'll have to come to me, I won't fall to you.

Copyright © losthergreeneyes ... [ 2010-08-10 22:05:54]
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Re: I tried my best, it's time for me to let go. (User Rating: 1 )
by mehuel on Tuesday, 10th August 2010 @ 10:21:09 PM AEST
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very dark and touching... Good work...

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