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Augest in mourning
Contributed by
Daniellemarie
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Tuesday, 10th August 2010 @ 08:40:54 PM in AEST
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The question isn't if god will forgive me, the real question here is if I will forgive me.
Never have I felt so damaged, hollowed out and all alone. Never have I felt so
useless, no real importance in my egsistance. Augest is a time to be free, running
along beaches and swimming in pools, I can not swim and I can not run along shiny
shores. How far does a person go untill they can't go any further? How long do our
souls grieve, like weepy widows dressed in black forever? Please someone give
me a hand to catch my tears, and reassure me that everything will maybe just
maybe make more sense another day far away from here today.
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Daniellemarie
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2010-08-10 20:40:54]
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Re: Augest in mourning
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 10th August 2010 @ 09:38:29 PM AEST
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We are always too hard on ourselves.
I can totally relate to this work of art.
This was the hardest for me to learn.
Jus rest in God's love and he will pull u thru.
Just think of his way of forgiving.
He never meant for us to be perfect. He knows you are there at he never leaves us. Nothing on this planet separate us from God..
You have a very unique talent and it's very pleasant to read. Jus grab your writing voice and go with it.
Very God work.
blessings,
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Re: Augest in mourning
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by losthergreeneyes on
Tuesday, 10th August 2010 @ 10:12:31 PM AEST
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I can really relate to this poem. I really enjoyed reading it, its like your words just reach out and grad you. Very good.
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Re: Augest in mourning
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by cashfan1 on
Wednesday, 11th August 2010 @ 03:42:19 AM AEST
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| these words glide smoothly with so much emotion.This is very readable and so well writen. |
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