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like a leaf to a tree
Contributed by
SamJoelle
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Tuesday, 10th August 2010 @ 11:25:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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life is temporary, each breath is numbered. Each leaf will fall off the tree becoming one with the ground, reborn. I'll shed my skin, wings will tear my flesh. A seed breaking through the earth. An ancient practice, blowing through the wind fast asleep.
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Re: like a leaf to a tree
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by quadira on
Tuesday, 10th August 2010 @ 11:39:45 AM AEST
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| I like this. a poem to ponder on. well done |
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Re: like a leaf to a tree
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by cashfan1 on
Tuesday, 10th August 2010 @ 12:17:02 PM AEST
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| A very lovely write. well expressed and your words really get me thinking. Well done. |
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Re: like a leaf to a tree
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by thebadguy9999 on
Tuesday, 10th August 2010 @ 02:20:33 PM AEST
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| nice |
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Re: like a leaf to a tree
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by lesoleilnoire on
Tuesday, 10th August 2010 @ 06:54:19 PM AEST
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Nice metaphor discussing the brief existence of life. Great imagery!
Heidi |
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Re: like a leaf to a tree
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by losthergreeneyes on
Tuesday, 10th August 2010 @ 10:09:03 PM AEST
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| This poem really makes you think, very very good. |
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Re: like a leaf to a tree
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 11th August 2010 @ 11:38:44 AM AEST
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An interesting, eclectic mix of images and ideas.
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Re: like a leaf to a tree
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by Perfectly_flawed on
Wednesday, 11th August 2010 @ 04:03:02 PM AEST
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| Good job. |
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Re: like a leaf to a tree
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by unknown_utopia on
Wednesday, 11th August 2010 @ 09:51:08 PM AEST
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I like this
well done |
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Re: like a leaf to a tree
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by andrewjones12 on
Friday, 13th August 2010 @ 06:49:28 AM AEST
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life conceived=) i dig it.
well done,
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Re: like a leaf to a tree
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by kleetas on
Saturday, 14th August 2010 @ 12:03:42 AM AEST
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| too deep for "nice" platitudes |
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