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THE SILHOUETTE OF LIFE.(DUSK)
Contributed by
andrewjones12
on
Tuesday, 10th August 2010 @ 10:48:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Once upon a vision’s edge....
The silhouette of life stains
topaz red.
Perpetually stalking sideways,
atop this side less sphere.
Taunting
from north to south,
it finds agony
In mediums never near.
Parallel to farther than perceived,
It begs hopelessly for
collisions appease.
Continuously a ray
From a point ill conceived.
Its confusion befalls
upon incomprehensive disbelief.
Weeping sorrowful of its setting moment of lust.
When dawn’s welcoming wakeful touch,
sets somberly
Slipping through its lanky clutch.
As cold betrays warmth
Into
dusk.
Copyright ©
andrewjones12
... [
2010-08-10 10:48:48]
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Re: THE SILHOUETTE OF LIFE.(DUSK)
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by beccaboo4400 on
Tuesday, 10th August 2010 @ 11:21:03 AM AEST
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| wow tht was amazing........i expect to be reading more from u. :) |
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Re: THE SILHOUETTE OF LIFE.(DUSK)
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by joydeep_nath on
Tuesday, 10th August 2010 @ 11:47:27 AM AEST
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| nicely wriiten..just the way a poem should be! |
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Re: THE SILHOUETTE OF LIFE.(DUSK)
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by cashfan1 on
Tuesday, 10th August 2010 @ 12:14:09 PM AEST
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Andrew
another breath taking piece of work I love the subject matter and the way your words flow right off the page, Look forward to more. |
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Re: THE SILHOUETTE OF LIFE.(DUSK)
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by thebadguy9999 on
Tuesday, 10th August 2010 @ 02:22:33 PM AEST
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| nice |
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Re: THE SILHOUETTE OF LIFE.(DUSK)
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 10th August 2010 @ 09:27:05 PM AEST
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This is totally mesmerizing !
smiles,
emy |
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Re: THE SILHOUETTE OF LIFE.(DUSK)
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by mehuel on
Wednesday, 11th August 2010 @ 12:30:19 AM AEST
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| very beautiful composition... And what an end "as cold betrays warmth into dusk"... Mesmerizing indeed... |
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