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The Forsaken
Contributed by
unknown_utopia
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Monday, 9th August 2010 @ 09:44:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Somebody help me
I can stop from silently screaming
When I get up
I fall down
and when I reach out
I get abused.
I know now I am one of the forsaken
Hell awaits me
after
this life time,
to god I am praying
I DON'T KNOW WHAT TO DO.
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2010-08-09 21:44:40]
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Re: The Forsaken
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by quadira on
Tuesday, 10th August 2010 @ 02:58:14 AM AEST
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| I love poetry with honesty and raw emotion and i feel this has them both. Short and to the point. just emotion in words. great write. |
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Re: The Forsaken
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by allforyou on
Tuesday, 10th August 2010 @ 09:01:21 AM AEST
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I can feel your frustration. Sometimes it really does
seem that Eden's gates have been closed. But
all you need is faith to get you through.
-Kara
Oh yeah, & I like the style of this. |
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