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Closing In
Contributed by
guiltycircles
on
Monday, 9th August 2010 @ 09:11:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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These creatures crawl and squirm
You think by now I’d learn
I don’t dare to move
Please don’t show concern.
I see them and I feel them
But I cannot touch them
Wrapped in wire coils
A victim to this mayhem.
As the minutes tick away
Here I am forced to stay
Surrounded by demonic insects
Closer and closer they play.
What will I do
How will I get through
When there is nowhere left
To hide or run to.
Copyright ©
guiltycircles
... [
2010-08-09 21:11:38]
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Re: Closing In
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by simsalabim on
Monday, 9th August 2010 @ 09:22:22 PM AEST
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if you believe it. it must be true.
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Re: Closing In
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by quadira on
Tuesday, 10th August 2010 @ 03:05:58 AM AEST
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| I like this. very atmospheric. |
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Re: Closing In
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by Punkrocknemo on
Friday, 27th August 2010 @ 12:09:32 PM AEST
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| Different but pretty good write. |
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Re: Closing In
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by Bexstasy on
Wednesday, 8th September 2010 @ 03:36:51 AM AEST
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| This is gooooood. |
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