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MY MOST PRECIOUS FRIEND
Contributed by
lovingcritters
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Sunday, 8th August 2010 @ 03:07:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
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MY MOST PRECIOUS FRIEND
When it is you write, teach me kindness, and revelry.
Honor the poets who wrote before me, beauteous poetry.
Rage if you must, speak softly, offend no one my friend.
Master my words, for downtrodden, persecuted, defend.
~~~~~
Speak of nature's wonders, with crafting streamline,
Giving credit to the a Marvelous Creator's design!
Many false gods do we see, most hate and destroy
Be inspirational, always helping others to find joy.
~~~~~
Hand in hand together we've endured travesties
My heart was always open to you, years over sixties.
You've never left me once, always by my side,
provide, helping me to decide, untried.
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In all kinds of weather, warm and sun shining or grey
Your attribute of loyalty impressed me to stay, not stray
You were there when I fell to my knees, futile prayer.
Out of pure desperation, I held you tight, to suffer.
~~~~~
Cross them out, do it right, words of superior excellence
Profanity dismissed, replaced instead, for silence.
Fallen, follows empathy, forgiveness, sympathy
Reasonableness, not dogmatic, refreshing, not filthy!
~~~~~
The needs of our time, consecrate, do not deprecate!
A world without love, and goodness, not orate.
Helping those lost, hearts hardened out of lawlessness.
Encourage loving ways, up-building, with courageous boldness.
~~~~~
How could I ever find the wisdom, or the word,
to thank you for confidentiality of all my emotions
you never once blurred, but captured.
The relief of your friendship meant as I related
sadness, loss, betrayal, bad berated!
~~~~~
Small victories, elated with joyfulness, and glee
Seeing the end in sight just you and me.....
remembered, for all eternity,
I will always be indebted to you
My Most Precious Friend..........
My Pen!
Did you guess before the end?
*smiles*
Created by
Lovingcritters
Created December 9, 2003
restored August 8, 2010
*Pen Smiles*
Copyright ©
lovingcritters
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Re: MY MOST PRECIOUS FRIEND
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Sunday, 8th August 2010 @ 04:56:56 PM AEST
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Gratefulness is a great virtue. A true fried is more worth than all the gold in the worled..
This poem, being partly didactic in genre, and partly a hertfelt thanksgiving to a great f riend is deeply moving.
Thanks a lot for composing and sharing.
PS Albert Einstein's dicta too is remarkabe and so very true. The maid of Orleans already answered her judges in like manner on this issue.On hearint it I composed "High Faculty - Imagination."
Abundant blessings
Love and peace
Elizabeth. |
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Re: MY MOST PRECIOUS FRIEND
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by cashfan1 on
Monday, 9th August 2010 @ 12:01:01 AM AEST
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Hi Connie,
How do you do it?? this is a well expressed and beautifuly writen piece. My day is made!!
Thanks for sharing. |
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Re: MY MOST PRECIOUS FRIEND
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by chrisdavid on
Monday, 9th August 2010 @ 12:48:01 AM AEST
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A great tribute to someone who sounds to be a truly great friend. I loved the music that goes with the poem. An enjoyable read.
Take care, Chris. |
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Re: MY MOST PRECIOUS FRIEND
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by theoklapoet on
Monday, 9th August 2010 @ 02:52:16 PM AEST
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| This was a terrific read I really enjoyed it.My friend is my computer it writes for me.I'm crippled with MD.Teresa |
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Re: MY MOST PRECIOUS FRIEND
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by andrewjones12 on
Tuesday, 10th August 2010 @ 11:32:01 AM AEST
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BRAVO! BRAVO! BRAVO!
you have written a peice worthy of global praise! and the end, oh what a marvolus bend. i lovce your writting connie! the whole time i was reading it i was think your best friend being writting, the act of it, then you summed it up with my pen=)) that was true genuis i love this consue, thank you for sharing.=)
much love,
your friend
-andrew. |
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Re: MY MOST PRECIOUS FRIEND
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by wood on
Tuesday, 10th August 2010 @ 02:58:25 PM AEST
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| great job! |
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Re: MY MOST PRECIOUS FRIEND
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 17th August 2010 @ 04:00:59 AM AEST
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Wow, I had no idea it was about a pen but even so, the pen can do many things including bringing friends together. Great job, Consue.  |
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Re: MY MOST PRECIOUS FRIEND
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by spud on
Tuesday, 17th August 2010 @ 07:54:10 AM AEST
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Hi Connie,
I must confess ... no, I didn't guess - but I had a
feeling it would be something inanimate which can
only spring to life when it is guided to do so by the
heart of a true human being!
Well scripted, Connie.
Tommy
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Re: MY MOST PRECIOUS FRIEND
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by rick2 on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2011 @ 06:42:45 PM AEST
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| well i'll be darned. very, very nice indeed! |
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Re: MY MOST PRECIOUS FRIEND
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by Aika on
Tuesday, 13th March 2012 @ 08:52:24 AM AEST
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it ś been soooo long time..... And you know what created a smile on my face? That you still write poetry! Amazing, unbelievable, incredible.. :)
I am sending you warm hugs from CZ... :)
Aika :)
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Re: MY MOST PRECIOUS FRIEND
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 12th April 2014 @ 08:07:19 PM AEST
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truly beautifully written; love it,
big hugs n' love nessa |
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