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Dark Feelings
Contributed by
colt540
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Saturday, 7th August 2010 @ 08:58:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Shall i weep or shall i die, should i fell form grace only to dine in Hell. Nothing sounds right but now my guts are twisted and sick with sorrow and shame as that of a man on his last legs. Why must i be strong to defend the weak, when the weak are what is really hurting nae killing me. For if my tears should stain the ground it would be like melted snow rushing through the creek bed. Deeper and deeper my heart begins to sunk as it is not a balloon but that of a Iron Weight. So Cold and Anger do i feel that love and passion are like trees in a storm, Happiness is like a prison wall, while the cold and anger allow thoughts dark and cruel to form to frighten even the most strong willed. As this comes to an end and my feeling towards things remains like that of a lion on the hunt, I pray for good and bad things to come to an end.
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Re: Dark Feelings
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by mehuel on
Saturday, 7th August 2010 @ 11:22:42 PM AEST
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| nicely put ... My favorite part ... "love and passion r like trees in the strom"... Beautiful wrtitten |
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Re: Dark Feelings
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by thebadguy9999 on
Sunday, 8th August 2010 @ 07:07:03 AM AEST
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| nice, God Bless You |
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