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Fool’s Heart
Contributed by
Spike
on
Saturday, 7th August 2010 @ 06:25:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Alex Stewart: Fool & Angel
and I wondered if you liked me,
if you felt some small affection, or
had a hint of wondering to
tilt in that direction
and I pined for your attention,
a glimmer of attraction, in a smile
or a gesture that would justify
my actions
and I thought about you constantly,
in the breath of every minute, as I
fantasised about my life if
you were somewhere in it
but you never were the answer,
as I never asked the question;
and all I’ve got for comfort
are the rags of my obsession.
Copyright ©
Spike
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2010-08-07 06:25:13]
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Re: Fool’s Heart
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by Balmain_Tiger on
Saturday, 7th August 2010 @ 07:17:05 AM AEST
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| Yeah I know this too Well because real love is Obsessive |
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Re: Fool’s Heart
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by cashfan1 on
Saturday, 7th August 2010 @ 10:10:20 AM AEST
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This is very well worded, you weave your poem around the imagination of the reader,
look forward to more. |
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Re: Fool’s Heart
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by ming on
Saturday, 7th August 2010 @ 04:21:33 PM AEST
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Profound line;
but you never were the answer,
as I never asked the question;
ming |
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Re: Fool’s Heart
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by emystar on
Saturday, 7th August 2010 @ 07:48:53 PM AEST
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You did an awesome job with this write.
Very good writing.
Huggs, blessings,
emy
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Re: Fool’s Heart
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by spud on
Wednesday, 18th August 2010 @ 01:27:33 PM AEST
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Hi,
Terrific style and rhythm and some classic succinct
one-liners. No unnecessary words used here,
everything led quite brilliantly to that last line ......
'are the rags of my obsession.'
Nice one Spikers!
Tommy
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