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Impromptu
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
on
Saturday, 7th August 2010 @ 02:14:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Beads of sorrow pool in my soul's windows;
life continues inside my heart's melancholy beat.
Spontaneous pain stabs my already gnawed happiness;
the attacks submerge all hope of transform smiles to blank expressions.
Life progresses on the path with impromptu footsteps.
The footprints left behind are vanishing,
as my tears wash away my existence.
The waves of woe wail with worry.
Once the waves laughed;
now the jagged waves crash violently.
My happiness floats lifelessly on the surface.
Copyright ©
lesoleilnoire
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2010-08-07 02:14:48]
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Re: Impromptu
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by northernlights on
Saturday, 7th August 2010 @ 02:55:14 AM AEST
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| Beautiful write sorry you going through this x |
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Re: Impromptu
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by cashfan1 on
Saturday, 7th August 2010 @ 03:10:45 AM AEST
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| This is very sad but as always your words are beautifuly writen,, very well done. |
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Re: Impromptu
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 7th August 2010 @ 11:15:38 PM AEST
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Gad, this line: Spontaneous pain stabs my already gnawed happiness
Really really sad and painful write. I know all too well those feelings of life's footprints vanishing.
I am so sorry you're suffering and hope it eases soon.
Tim
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