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Bliss
Contributed by
Nightshade333
on
Friday, 6th August 2010 @ 08:00:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Dont you feel the Butterflies
Lifting your heart to the sky
She smiles
Takes my hand
The world is dying fast
The stars are falling
Shes dancing with my heart
Tempting our fate
I Love her more than ever
Her evil lil smile
Happy eyes
I can't resist
I feel the freedom
I have always Craved
Dancing thru the Night
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2010-08-06 20:00:01]
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Re: Bliss
(User Rating: 1 )
by northernlights on
Saturday, 7th August 2010 @ 03:02:55 AM AEST
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| Can feel the pull and waves of being in love throughout very effectively creating the feeling of bliss just sightly juddered with the reference to an evil smile enjoyed this |
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Re: Bliss
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by mysticmercury on
Sunday, 8th August 2010 @ 09:18:09 PM AEST
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| calm & beautiful :) |
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Re: Bliss
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by Rasberry on
Wednesday, 11th August 2010 @ 08:23:18 AM AEST
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| Honestly?Its okay. |
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