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Murder Outside Room 7.09
Contributed by
puppy_dog_eyes
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Friday, 6th August 2010 @ 03:08:27 PM in AEST
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There's a murder being committed,below my very eyes
From the vantage on my balcony up here in room 7.09
The roar of night waves crashing on the beach cannot displace
This brutal act of butchery that's framed by neon lights
Accomplices entombed in shadows sit centre, left and right
Martyrs to misguided cause, they sway like chorus girls
A dreadful dirge with loud applause projected to the sky
As drink fuelled, frenzied, baying crowd begins to yell for more
Barry White is dying by staccato off key tones
Mack The Knife is bleeding in this sea front cabaret
My brow is furrowed, how he ploughed his way through Fields of Gold
I fear for Frank Sinatra, now cued up for the cull.
I cannot find solution, except to take repose
Retire to a land of harmony, in melodies of dreams
To the singer who stole tranquility, placed discord in its stead
Perhaps I'm not the only one with reason to retire !!
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Re: Murder Outside Room 7.09
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by emystar on
Friday, 6th August 2010 @ 03:19:36 PM AEST
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wo what a life.
That's awe full I thank God it wasn't you my friend.
That's so close to home, huh?
Well what can I say except I'm stunned.
stay safe.
Big huggs,
emy |
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Re: Murder Outside Room 7.09
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 6th August 2010 @ 04:14:45 PM AEST
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When i walk to work in the late afternoon/early evening (or, as a comedy character once put it: pre-evening) I have to walk past a pub in which murder is committed on a daily basis, by the medium of karaoke machine. I heard Sinatra's 'my way' being put to death the other day.
I envy the Japanese. They are brilliant, ingenious people. But inventing karaoke was not exactly their finest hour...
-Phil |
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Re: Murder Outside Room 7.09
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by fuzzler on
Friday, 6th August 2010 @ 06:23:27 PM AEST
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| WELL DONE...... BUT YOU HOWEVER TAKE CARE OF YOURSELF! |
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Re: Murder Outside Room 7.09
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by northernlights on
Saturday, 7th August 2010 @ 03:09:07 AM AEST
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| Loved this you could not have expressed in a better way the 1st degree murder of music by 2nd rate singers, I hope your ears have not sustained lasting damage lol |
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Re: Murder Outside Room 7.09
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by venkat on
Saturday, 7th August 2010 @ 08:02:30 PM AEST
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| Oh..very funny murder, better we retire when a hell creates the music:-)venkat |
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Re: Murder Outside Room 7.09
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by Daniellemarie on
Sunday, 8th August 2010 @ 06:11:39 PM AEST
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| like a csi episode...so freaky. |
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Re: Murder Outside Room 7.09
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by MatthewKerna on
Sunday, 24th October 2010 @ 12:20:34 PM AEST
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Touche puppy
a cracking good read that
keep it up |
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