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stars
Contributed by
polaris773
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Friday, 6th August 2010 @ 11:27:38 AM in AEST
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Such a clear night,
no cluods to intrupet my sight
from these beautiful stars.
Those awesome orbs of light
illuminating the blank sky,
like tiny splashs of bleach
on a perfect black canvas.
But which is more perfect?
I may not have the right to say.
This has to be a example of
perfect imperfection
Copyright ©
polaris773
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2010-08-06 11:27:38]
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Re: stars
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by allforyou on
Friday, 6th August 2010 @ 12:22:43 PM AEST
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Good write. The misspellings can be distracting though.
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Re: stars
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by emystar on
Friday, 6th August 2010 @ 02:25:21 PM AEST
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A beautiful write.
Your point comes across clear.
keep up the good work.
blessings,
emy |
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