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Let us pretend we never met
Contributed by
futuremoves
on
Friday, 6th August 2010 @ 07:45:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Let us pretend, let us play
Like when we were kids
Cops and robbers or pirates...touche!
Let us pretend our hearts were not touched,
Like strangers with no history who never meant much.
Let us pretend it was all a dream.
A connection won't be severed
Our hearts will not bleed.
Let us pretend we never locked eyes
How true lovers gaze before a relationships demise.
Let us pretend we never made love
No beautiful union sent from above.
Let us pretend we will never forget
The time that we've spent
The feelings we let
Let us pretend we really don't care
That nothing mattered.
At least nothing we shared.
Let us pretend there's no wrinkle in time.
A future cut short long before it's prime.
Let us pretend, let us believe
There was no us
No you and me
Let us pretend we buy the cliche
If it's meant to be they'll come back someday.
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Re: Let us pretend we never met
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by Pat346 on
Friday, 6th August 2010 @ 09:42:27 AM AEST
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| I know this feeling all too well. It's sooo tough. Poem was very well-written and I enjoyed it. Thanks for the write |
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Re: Let us pretend we never met
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by polaris773 on
Friday, 6th August 2010 @ 11:00:57 AM AEST
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| its a nice poem well written but the middle stanza is contradictory to the rest of the poem maybe if you moved it to the bottom or second to last it might flow better. I think with polish it would be even better |
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Re: Let us pretend we never met
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by allforyou on
Friday, 6th August 2010 @ 12:21:57 PM AEST
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My favorite part:
"Let us pretend we will never forget,
The time that we've spent,
The feelings we let."
Very clever.
-Kara
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Re: Let us pretend we never met
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by GuyJular on
Saturday, 21st August 2010 @ 10:55:10 AM AEST
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| Ya I've felt this way a couple times. |
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