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Rotten Fool
Contributed by
EdwardAdelin
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Friday, 6th August 2010 @ 03:38:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Tired, You crawl
I'm sad, you too
You're like toys
Come back, my heart
Your home is unknown
Time to lose
Untie my tie
My brother deludes
Wire the knobs
Tie my time
My mother devote
Lie my cry
Get sweet time
Be strong like you
Your soul your sound
Yourself
Tie my time
Unlock my love
Get sweet time
Dead strong like you
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Re: Rotten Fool
(User Rating: 1 )
by iodinelove on
Friday, 6th August 2010 @ 10:47:58 PM AEST
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I don't say this often, but I don't have a clue as to what you're talking about in this. Care to enlighten me?
Always, Abraham |
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Re: Rotten Fool
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by EdwardAdelin on
Saturday, 7th August 2010 @ 03:29:13 AM AEST
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| It's about a split personality person, or sutiation (suit yourself) That "person" is gone and the "character" is trying to call him back.It's a sick game between reality and fantasy. Heartbroken ego gives the smell of a dying part in your veins. It relates with both family and friends. Emotions and fears. Love... It's about solitude and the need of someone who will be strong enought to help and care. |
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Re: Rotten Fool
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by colt540 on
Saturday, 7th August 2010 @ 03:50:56 PM AEST
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| Very Nice Rhythm and it is easy to follow, not as dark as i thought the title portrayed it to be, none the less good. |
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Re: Rotten Fool
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by EdwardAdelin on
Saturday, 7th August 2010 @ 06:45:55 PM AEST
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| Lately there's music in my head. Those sincere words are like lyrics to me. |
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