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The End
Contributed by
DoubleS
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Friday, 6th August 2010 @ 12:28:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I wrote this in 2008 way before my "first poem" titled "My World" ... I wrote this poem for a girl I liked (before I met my lovebug) which I gave to said girl and hoping she would like me back... This is a long poem, but I promise you it's a good one...
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Can you believe
It's only been a year
Since I first met you
As time disappears
I go back to the time
When we first met
Didn't know who you were
I made a bet
I bet myself
To walk over to you
Just to say hi
And you gave me the shoe
Several days after that
I tried again
You opened up the door
And you let me in
You told me some things
About your life
How your mom had died
I didn't know what it's like
Sometimes I would joke
You'd get mad and cry
I'd say I forgot
As I Looked in your eyes
You'd pushed me away
Continued to cry
I knew I shouldn't of
Looked in your eyes
What was minutes to me
Was seconds to you
No matter how long
I thought it was true
So lets flash forward
A boy just broke your heart
I could tell from your eyes
He tore you apart
When I saw you crying
I thought I could help
So I told you a story
About myself
I said in my life
I've gone through some bad times
Sometimes I get through it
Through the course of time
These things will happen
If you like it or not
I learn to get through it
And love what I got
My story seemed to make you
Happy inside
But I could see in your eyes
You still want to cry
So I gave you some space
And some time to think
To get rid of the pain
To let it all shrink
My story seemed to help
Well, more than I thought
Cause now we are friends
But I liked you alot
So I gave it a week
Before I would ask
You the question
I was too afraid to ask
But I wound up the nerve
To ask you that day
But it took me a bit
To find out the way
We walked for a bit
I was talking to you
About someone I liked
Someone we both knew
It took you a while
To figure it out
Then it got quiet
With the moment of doubt
You said that you liked me
But not in that way
I just want to be friends
If that is okay
I said that it's cool
Didn't say what I meant
Because I still liked you
More than I could rent
Lets flash threw the year
We certainly grew up
You got a new boy
And I still get beat up
That the words "I liked"
Has grown up to "I love"
To where I would be there
When push comes to shove
I always feel strange
When ever your around
It almost feels like
I am about to drown
I think that it's because
I love you alot
Even more than you think
So what is the plot
Just please don't read this
And feel sorry for me
And dump your boyfriend
And come running to me
If you want to you can
Don't do it for me
Do it for yourself
Or who you want to see
But I want you to know
I'm fine with just friends
As long as we are
Until the very
END!!!
Copyright ©
DoubleS
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2010-08-06 00:28:05]
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Re: The End
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by allforyou on
Friday, 6th August 2010 @ 12:40:32 PM AEST
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This is a really cute "boy meets girl" story. My favorite part:
"Lets flash threw the year
We certainly grew up
You got a new boy
And I still get beat up
That the words "I liked"
Has grown up to "I love"
To where I would be there
When push comes to shove"
Especially, "I still get beat up." It shows how much you really care for this person without actually saying it. Gave me goosebumps.
-Kara |
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