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Sacrosanct
Contributed by
paradoxtwo
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Wednesday, 4th August 2010 @ 11:40:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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The Dominions of mankind,
Warp slowly around the eyes of the user.
As the intoxicated believe they're in the right mind,
To act as a guiding light to the lost souls.
We, the perished to the depths of no beginnings.
The deep pit of the moles,
Where the people believe in anti-sinnings
And the thought of resurrection is sacrosanct.
I am the accuser,
Placed where the great ship once sank,
To unwrap our goggles and to understand the quarks of man.
Filled high with the benefits of the almighty bank,
To accomplish all that I can.
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Re: Sacrosanct
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 4th August 2010 @ 12:04:19 PM AEST
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This is a very thought provoking piece. Well versed and the beginning sets the tone. This line here is greatness:
We, the perished to the depths of no beginnings
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Re: Sacrosanct
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by navydocny on
Thursday, 5th August 2010 @ 05:19:03 AM AEST
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Great imagery here...
Great verbage...
I Look forward to more....
Keep up the good work...
Steve |
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