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Contributed by
polaris773
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Tuesday, 3rd August 2010 @ 01:42:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Your face is easy to read like Dr. Seuss,
But I’ve been to dumb to read between the lines.
You could have told me girls night out would take weeks,
I probably wouldn’t have understood what you meant.
It’s just that the picture of us in my head were too distracting.
I wish you could have seen how beautiful it is.
I guess it wasn’t worth the words I used to describe it
since you’ve been gone before it was finished
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2010-08-03 13:42:16]
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Re: picture
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by cashfan1 on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2010 @ 02:28:01 PM AEST
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| This is a beautiful write, a sensitive subject well handled by the wonderful use of words. well done. |
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Re: picture
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by thebadguy9999 on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2010 @ 07:46:21 PM AEST
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| nice |
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