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The Stupidity of Me
Contributed by
allforyou
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Tuesday, 3rd August 2010 @ 10:54:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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The stupidity of me,
to feel the things I feel.
The insincerity of you,
to make it seem like I can't heal.
NO, I WILL NOT HEAL!
Oh, the uncertainty of me,
that life may tear me down once more.
And I only wish to hurt myself,
to end this so-called "life."
The duplicity of me,
to think these thoughts without intention.
I do not live the life that I portray,
I live a lie.
NO, I DO NOT WANT TO DIE!
Oh, this isolated me,
that I may one day see again,
the light of the sun; the dim glow of the moon,
illuminates the path I walk.
The insanity of me,
that chains me to this fence.
Without direction,
I cannot move any which way.
NO, I WILL NOT MOVE!
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Re: The Stupidity of Me
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2010 @ 11:18:05 AM AEST
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| The hardest move to make is moving forward. The ease of stress and responsibility when we stop fighting the tide can lure us in, but with change comes true strength. I like how you seem to be fighting with yourself here. Seemingly waving a white flag at times, yet fierce determination keeps shining through. Well done. |
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Re: The Stupidity of Me
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by unknown_utopia on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2010 @ 11:39:27 AM AEST
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oh my
you seem to be stuck in the same
twi light outer limits zone
that I exsist in..... |
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Re: The Stupidity of Me
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2010 @ 01:12:23 PM AEST
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Sounds like a huge battle between the heart and mind.
Good work.
Hang tuff.
huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: The Stupidity of Me
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by fuzzler on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2010 @ 11:01:04 PM AEST
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| Great, i felt it, i too am stuck in a similar state. |
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Re: The Stupidity of Me
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 6th August 2010 @ 07:09:49 AM AEST
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You seem to be describing the last year of my life with this one. I could especially empathize with this bit:
'The duplicity of me,
to think these thoughts without intention.
I do not live the life that I portray,
I live a lie.
NO, I DO NOT WANT TO DIE!'
I would say that I do not enjoy life, but I don't want to die either. Death means there's no chance of happiness EVER AGAIN. At least with life, there's the hope of a spontaneous arrival of happiness.
-Phil
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