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A bene placito
Contributed by
navydocny
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Tuesday, 3rd August 2010 @ 09:25:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Her eyes bequeath a vivacity of life
Piercing beauty, to souls they will sing
Vanquished adulation seemingly rife
Bringing her love on a broken wing
Glorious is this heart, which still lives
Perforated and empty, drained of all
Dreaming of a moment, that one gives
As waiting for the desert rains to fall
Prison is the sleep with dreams that wait
Pause be given, to the divan of want
Needs fulfilled by moments and fate
What could’ve been will enduringly haunt
So grand, the passion I would drink of thee
To run to which from that we flee
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2010-08-03 09:25:30]
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Re: A bene placito
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2010 @ 09:44:22 AM AEST
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So eloquently worded and with your choice words you have stirred up vivid imagery. I love the last two lines, and this:
...Bringing her love on a broken wing... |
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Re: A bene placito
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by allforyou on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2010 @ 11:32:11 AM AEST
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I loved this. Especially: "Glorious is this heart, which still lives/ Perforated and empty, drained of all/ Dreaming of a moment, that one gives/ As wating for the desert rains to fall."
Great imagery.
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Re: A bene placito
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2010 @ 01:01:58 PM AEST
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Wow friend, you're cranking out some great writes these days.
Enjoy your leave and have an awesome, happy meaningful time.
Take care of your self.
Big huggs, blessings, peace, joy,
emy |
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