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One Last Chance
Contributed by
losthergreeneyes
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Monday, 2nd August 2010 @ 10:32:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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I know there's something more,
My heart is screaming for this, and its in your eyes i see it.
My heart aches for you, you are the only true love...
I've been waiting for a chance to just show you what i have become,
And what you have been missing.
The heart dosen't lie, and never does an instinct,
And my instincts are screaming for you to just let me in one more time.
Your an angel in my eyes, and always will be.
If i let this go, i'm afraid that i will never ever get it back.
Your my heart and more apart of my soul then you know.
In you green eyes i find freedom, freedom that i never knew.
Ever since you left i can't help but be trapped.
Trapped inside and i just can't let go.
To you it may seem silly, and you ask for respect.
So i respect what you have to do, and thats be away.
But why come back, if i mean nothing?
I've had so much time to think about everything that went wrong,
And now i know that i love you truly, forever, and always.
I feel it everyday in my bones that something big is coming,
Is it you? If its not then i know i won't be able to accept it...
Cause my soul is nothing without you.
I still love you, I will Forever and Always.
So please stop, and just think about what your leaveing...
I know that no one will ever love you as much as i do...
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2010-08-02 22:32:39]
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Re: One Last Chance
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by polaris773 on
Monday, 2nd August 2010 @ 10:38:01 PM AEST
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| I have to say i think weve all been there or at least we all have and it blows. but i think thats what makes this good the realation everyone can get. i really did like this and most of the time i just say that but this is the ebst one you wrote at least to me |
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Re: One Last Chance
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by cashfan1 on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2010 @ 02:54:33 AM AEST
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| This is very well writen, your words bring your feelings to life so much so they jump off the page. Thanks for sharing. |
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Re: One Last Chance
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by RuMPleStiLTSkiN on
Wednesday, 4th August 2010 @ 04:23:56 AM AEST
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| i really like this alot, great writing, keep it up dear :) |
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Re: One Last Chance
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by kadie on
Sunday, 22nd August 2010 @ 04:11:02 PM AEST
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really liked you poem .
keep writing |
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