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Beauty
Contributed by
hanasuru
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Monday, 2nd August 2010 @ 08:41:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Where are you
Fill my life for others' view
Make my wildest dreams come true
The ones where joy and sadness
Turn to one
Sullen void and blazing sun
Greatest love is now undone
Just like a canvas covered
All in black
Someone finds behind a crack
Treasure painted some years back
Enjoyed not in its time but
Cherished now
Beauty missed we don't know how
Nostalgia alone can endow
A feeling that our lives will
Never know
Only time can truly show
Left our marks atop the snow
For others to look down on
Who can tell
Beauty from these marks does swell
Someone down the road will yell
This life knew beauty I will never know
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Re: Beauty
(User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on
Monday, 2nd August 2010 @ 09:51:32 PM AEST
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Reading this I felt so calm, this is a delightful poem.
Michelle |
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Re: Beauty
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by cashfan1 on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2010 @ 03:45:45 AM AEST
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| I really like this. Very gentle and smooth across the page, well done. |
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Re: Beauty
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by RuMPleStiLTSkiN on
Wednesday, 4th August 2010 @ 04:19:07 AM AEST
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i love it :)
great write .. |
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