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Dreams
Contributed by
GinSoakedBoy
on
Monday, 2nd August 2010 @ 03:14:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Morning’s broken in again
Dreams have wilted in the wake
How we loved each other then
Reality soon returns again
Now I turn to see my friend
I wish that she was in my bed
And I wish that she could comprehend
The way her smile has ***** my head
So close to the kiss, so far from my mind
The most desired can be unkind sometimes
The most desired she sees sometimes
How she frees my soul but watches it die
So locked in dreams the love remains
And when I wake just for a second
Just for a second
Before reality claims my mind
Before the clarity wrecks my eyes
Only for a second
From the bottom of the heart
We loved
Copyright ©
GinSoakedBoy
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2010-08-02 15:14:15]
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Re: Dreams
(User Rating: 1 )
by polaris773 on
Monday, 2nd August 2010 @ 05:50:21 PM AEST
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thats is a solid poem man
but wishkey is better than gin |
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Re: Dreams
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by cashfan1 on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2010 @ 03:43:47 AM AEST
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| Very well writen, good use of words. I like it very much. Keep them coming. |
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Re: Dreams
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by Daniellemarie on
Sunday, 8th August 2010 @ 06:16:07 PM AEST
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| I like this poem alot, dreams are so teasing sometimes so real you wake up and can almost still taste it. |
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Re: Dreams
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by Banjosandwitch on
Thursday, 16th September 2010 @ 05:18:08 AM AEST
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| shmaltzy but nice |
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