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Confusion
Contributed by
Bolts
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Monday, 2nd August 2010 @ 02:43:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Filled with wrong I woefully lie and survey the bleakness of my inner eye,
Naught but paranoya, confusion and Sin; a cocktail of misinturpretation and hurt.
This is that which lies within.
Pleasure becomes empty, relationships faulter, chasing and chasing, high after high,
Doubting of self, lonelyness, guilt.
Unfathomable vessel of complex desire, faltering, fluctuating, with every wind and tide,
Little if any consistency within resides.
How does a man weigh good against bad, who's direction is soverien, what is man without self?
Beneith endless facads of generosity and good will, beneith it all lies a yurning for help, infinate is the chasm, the black whole within,
Woe to those who satisfy this with Sin.
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Re: Confusion
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by northernlights on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2010 @ 03:20:07 PM AEST
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| Strong interesting write great start your sensitivity conveys a depth of feeling and your thinking prompts questioning well written just need a spell checker |
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Re: Confusion
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by wood on
Tuesday, 10th August 2010 @ 03:00:32 PM AEST
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| amazing expression |
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