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replenish
Contributed by
andrewjones12
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Monday, 2nd August 2010 @ 08:07:34 AM in AEST
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Haiku
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The solemn storm stomps,
Drenching mother natures wants
Until the clouds unknot.
Copyright ©
andrewjones12
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2010-08-02 08:07:34]
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Re: replenish
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by lovingcritters on
Monday, 2nd August 2010 @ 12:36:12 PM AEST
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Dear Andrew,
You outdid yourself on this one Andrew!
Never have I read a Haiku with such meaning, depth, and understanding. The last line was brilliant indeed!
Clouds really do unknot~! It's a Splendid Mind's eyes revelation, that only you could see!
Thanking you so much for sharing this with me!
Warm love
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Re: replenish
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by losthergreeneyes on
Monday, 2nd August 2010 @ 12:40:56 PM AEST
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| very good. |
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Re: replenish
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by The_Writing_Master on
Monday, 2nd August 2010 @ 01:31:35 PM AEST
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This haiku is a true marvel! A gem! Brilliant work friend!
-Matt |
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Re: replenish
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by lesoleilnoire on
Monday, 2nd August 2010 @ 08:06:43 PM AEST
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I loved this haiku. Every word painted this vivid picture of the storm. Great job!
Heidi |
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Re: replenish
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by cashfan1 on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2010 @ 03:41:15 AM AEST
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Andrew,
well done my friend. this is truely magnficent!!
This truely shows nature for what she is,
unpredictable. Thanks for sharing. |
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Re: replenish
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by ming on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2010 @ 12:13:34 PM AEST
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This is a very nice write. But I thought it was supposed to go 5-7-5
ming |
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Re: replenish
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by Daniellemarie on
Saturday, 14th August 2010 @ 12:45:39 PM AEST
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Short but oh so Sweet
-Daniellemarie- |
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