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OVER
Contributed by
andrewjones12
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Monday, 2nd August 2010 @ 07:26:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Sour sweet drops
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Dripping satisfied feet.
Intoxicating tremors,
Hesitate supports last leap.
Yellow plated pavement
Craves lines of red.
Cold steel persuasion begs
Two steps ahead………
Gravity’s repast
Taste best dead.
-thoughts inside my drug induced head.
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2010-08-02 07:26:56] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: OVER
(User Rating: 1 ) by cashfan1 on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2010 @ 03:49:46 AM AEST (User
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Wow Andrew!
This is a very stark, hard subject to deal with, yet your words are full of depth and meaning.
I hope you never feel like this again, but many thanks for sharing what is a very personal subject. |
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