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MY FIRST, MY LAST, MY ONLY
Contributed by
chrisdavid
on
Monday, 2nd August 2010 @ 12:14:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Love should be for life, should be forever
This I will abide
I can't imagine what it would be like
Without you by my side
Love is all about strength, it's all about trust
You know that it is true
I make a vow to never leave
I will stay forever with you
You give me all that you can
You make me feel so complete
I hope you see
You are my first, my last, my only
The way I always want it to be
From now until...
Eternity
Copyright ©
chrisdavid
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2010-08-02 00:14:11]
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Re: MY FIRST, MY LAST, MY ONLY
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by losthergreeneyes on
Monday, 2nd August 2010 @ 12:42:50 PM AEST
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| Very good poem, i jsut wish the love i feel for someone would be seen so she would come back. |
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Re: MY FIRST, MY LAST, MY ONLY
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by DoubleS on
Monday, 2nd August 2010 @ 03:11:49 PM AEST
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| cool write good job |
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Re: MY FIRST, MY LAST, MY ONLY
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by lovingcritters on
Monday, 2nd August 2010 @ 06:59:29 PM AEST
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This poem was very touching indeed! I loved each and every line to be. I'm with you CD, that's exactly how love should be!
I hope yours lasts for eternity!
Wondeful
Warm love,
consue |
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Re: MY FIRST, MY LAST, MY ONLY
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by kerissasmith on
Friday, 15th October 2010 @ 01:54:32 PM AEST
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| touching poem. very true. |
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