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NightLife
Contributed by
Kane
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Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 11:35:00 AM in AEST
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The taste of life fresh upon my lips,
A faint heartbeat, as life escapes through two holes,
Flesh so sweet and crisp,
Feeding on the weak, my presents can never be known,
Visions of my victims, torment my mind,
Sceams of fear, so much has change in a hundred years,
Hungry and hate leave me blind,
Death in the flesh, eternal life my only regert,
I walk in the shadows, lonly and cold,
Just wathing the world change before my eyes,
I can't remember a sunset, or a sunrise, I sleep at those times,
I walk through the night, I'm sicken by the enjoyment of life,
I've forgotten what it's like to feel, death doesn't even seem real,
I can't respect something I can not have,
I've asked for death it hasn't come, so I wait cold and alone,
My skin pale and clamy, I didn't ask for it, so don't blame me,
I would glady die a thousand times, for the chance to see just one sunrise,
I walk among you, but you havn't a clue,
No companionship, I'm forced to deal with my loneiness,
As night falls, I awake in search of a way to end it all.
Heart & Soul
Kane
Copyright ©
Kane
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2003-04-17 11:35:00]
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Re: NightLife
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by shelby on
Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 12:12:12 PM AEST
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Great job. Hey I dance with Phantoms at night so maybe we will run onto eachother somewhere. LOL Anyway I enjoyed this poem.
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Re: NightLife
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by shelby on
Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 12:12:26 PM AEST
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Great job. Hey I dance with Phantoms at night so maybe we will run into eachother somewhere. LOL Anyway I enjoyed this poem.
Michelle |
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Re: NightLife
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 02:22:38 PM AEST
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| Very interesting write, Kane.... |
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Re: NightLife
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by The_Phantom on
Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 03:52:06 PM AEST
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Strong, and a bit deep, I liked it, great write Kane.
The Phantom |
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Re: NightLife
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by Cancer on
Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 05:29:56 PM AEST
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enthralling and well written. a rainbow of misery expressed in just a few strokes. incredible.
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Re: NightLife
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 05:41:56 PM AEST
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| great write, although i dont know if i want to meet up with you on a dark night in a spooky alley, lol, i love your poetry don't get me wrong, your thoughts are deep and i love how you write, and the things that come to the surface from within' hugs nessa |
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Re: NightLife
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 18th April 2003 @ 03:32:52 AM AEST
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this is karoody...anyway, i really enjoyed this write....your words are very captivating and descriptive...
take care,
kara |
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Re: NightLife
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by venkat on
Friday, 18th April 2003 @ 04:11:11 AM AEST
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| Oh! Shadow Knight .. strong in your night.. just share my happiness.. venkatvenkat |
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Re: NightLife
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by venkat on
Friday, 18th April 2003 @ 04:11:40 AM AEST
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| Oh! Shadow Knight .. strong in your night.. just share my happiness.. venkat |
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Re: NightLife
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by Kane on
Friday, 18th April 2003 @ 08:15:56 PM AEST
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Thank you all for your comments, your words have great impacted on me. Thank you.
Kane |
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Re: NightLife
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by Kane on
Friday, 18th April 2003 @ 08:16:49 PM AEST
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Thank you all for your comments, your words have great impact on me. Thank you.
Kane |
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Re: NightLife
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by BlackFire9786 on
Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 12:37:11 PM AEST
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THis was a great poem! A whole life described well, in a few stanzas, it's awesome!
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