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The Sweetest Killer
Contributed by
shelbygirl16
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Saturday, 31st July 2010 @ 11:08:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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"I fell for the lies,the game,the passionate flame,the gentle kiss and infinate wish...but even though your gone...I'd rather feel the painful outcome of the lies you said then to have felt nothing at all. I missed your gentle touch until i found out it didnt mean much. I loved you in general and you teased me to get what you wanted course you left when i held my ground but look around? Whose all alone now? I feel nothing for you now and its a shame i ever did cuz I realized your a loser and i deserve better. Maybe next time you'll learn...oh wait...whose heart gets broken is not your consern."
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Re: The Sweetest Killer
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by yvonxsmeets on
Sunday, 1st August 2010 @ 04:09:51 AM AEST
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very good poem
i hope he gets to read this poem someday |
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Re: The Sweetest Killer
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by The_Unknown on
Sunday, 1st August 2010 @ 11:49:37 AM AEST
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I hope he gets to read this poem as well.
very well written but i'm sorry to hear about it
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Re: The Sweetest Killer
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by Fern on
Saturday, 23rd October 2010 @ 08:31:11 AM AEST
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| You were hurt by this guy, but fortunately, rose above and beyond your grief and got right on with your life. Congratulations! Thanks for sharing your very well-written poem, and thanks for sharing the fact that life CAN go on even after an affair has concluded. Hopefully, others in similar situations will take heart after reading this wonderful piece you have constructed for us. |
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