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False Pretense
Contributed by
createbeauty
on
Saturday, 31st July 2010 @ 07:03:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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You linger like you're standing still
Jump buildings like there's no real thrill
Climb mountains canopying the sweat on your chin
Feel torturous pain but put on the sleekest grin
You pretend you don't love her, but it's unmasked in your eyes
Why bottle it up? Why not give love a try?
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Re: False Pretense
(User Rating: 1 ) by Obnoxious_Bread on
Sunday, 1st August 2010 @ 10:38:46 AM AEST (User
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Love not corresponded is a hard to deal with, nice write and best of luck. |
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