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That terrifying sound
Contributed by
yvonxsmeets
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Saturday, 31st July 2010 @ 09:37:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
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That terrifying sound, those screaming tires and the headlights that blinded her
She saw it: There he lay
It happened so fast it was just a blur
It was a catastrophic accident, just like that his life was taken away
So young but jet he was the one to die
Couldn't stop him as she saw him cross that road
She was the only one to cry
No time to warn him if only she knowed
Hoping for someone to hear her or maybe just giving her a sign
Trying to push those memories away
Thinking about it still sends shivers down her spine
Never forgetting that she lost her little brother that day
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Re: That terrifying sound
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by emystar on
Saturday, 31st July 2010 @ 05:31:59 PM AEST
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This is so sad but you did a great job telling her story.
Huggs,
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Re: That terrifying sound
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by Obnoxious_Bread on
Sunday, 1st August 2010 @ 10:47:46 AM AEST
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| Really conveys sadness and desperation, sad feelings but good write. Thanks for sharing. |
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