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Pre-Dawn Redemption.
Contributed by
cashfan1
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Saturday, 31st July 2010 @ 04:37:58 AM in AEST
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There is something comfortable and cool
About the hours of pre-dawn.
These hours are found in a no man's land
Between deep dark and bright day breaking.
The innocence of these hours offer redemption
And a peace I have never felt before.
The trees are droopy with sleep
And the mountains a mere outline charcoaled on my mind,
A shadow hinting at what lays beyond.
Badger, the nocturnal monarch, is busy in clearings,
The dog fox patrols the headland
And the jealous owl shakes the wood from dreaming slumber.
These hours are easy, delivering solitude to a weary mind,
The silence a deep fierce burning in my head.
And in these hours I am safe, safe from a world
That dangles dangerously on the end of a fuse
That at any time might ignite and explode in my face.
But for now, in the mind cooling secret comfort of pre-dawn,
I am at peace. Redemption is mine.
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Re: Pre-Dawn Redemption.
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by yvonxsmeets on
Saturday, 31st July 2010 @ 05:30:34 AM AEST
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| I like it! ^^ |
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Re: Pre-Dawn Redemption.
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by thebadguy9999 on
Saturday, 31st July 2010 @ 06:30:06 AM AEST
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| I Love It |
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Re: Pre-Dawn Redemption.
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by emystar on
Saturday, 31st July 2010 @ 05:44:21 PM AEST
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Very good writing.
You painted a beautiful picture with words.
Blessings,
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Re: Pre-Dawn Redemption.
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by andrewjones12 on
Monday, 2nd August 2010 @ 07:50:32 AM AEST
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nothing like a cup of coffee before work=)
i loved it dennis, felt like i was sitting on a deck drinking coffee at 4:30 in the mourning. which was lovely and refreshing.
thanks you posting this=)
blessings,
andrew. |
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