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To what could have been, but never will.
Contributed by
losthergreeneyes
on
Friday, 30th July 2010 @ 09:49:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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To look into her eyes, I know i can't
Cause I'll fall riht back into her love.
Her eyes so green beautiful and wide, makes me feel like my future is to see them everyday.
To hold what i feel back, feels like toucher.
But i know just to feel her grace i must keep it in.
I want to hold her with all my heart, and love her like no other.
She says she's waiting for her forever, when i know i can be just that,
But still i can't say one word casue to lose her again i would lose myself as well.
Its not the fact that i need her, its the fact that i love her.
I would do anything to see her happy,
If she let me in, just one more time...
I would kiss her longer
Hold her tighter
Love her forever.
I'll love her forever anyway, but in this case it won't be me that holds her.
She`s an amazing girl, words can`t explain the way she makes me feel when i`m with her.
Every love song in the world still wouldn`t explain it, you could put them all together
And still my heart looks for more ways to say it.
Cause I love you dosen`t feel like enough, when all i want is to hold her.
Bring her higher, raise her above the crowd and say..that`s my gorl.
The way she walks, feels like she could make music with every step,
Her smile, brighter then the sun lights up my world and i can`t help bt smile back.
When i`m in her presence i feel like nothing else matters, just that i`m there with her.
Her beauty is by no comparison and she`s even more beautiful on the inside
The heart that is insaid her is one of a kind, there is no other person that has it.
She holds all the strenght in ther world, while mine can`t bare to watch her go.
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Re: To what could have been, but never will.
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by thebadguy9999 on
Saturday, 31st July 2010 @ 03:33:41 AM AEST
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| pretty good poem,but I would watch my spelling |
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Re: To what could have been, but never will.
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by yvonxsmeets on
Saturday, 31st July 2010 @ 06:13:53 AM AEST
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this poem really got to me..
well done! |
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Re: To what could have been, but never will.
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by Maygee on
Saturday, 31st July 2010 @ 06:15:53 AM AEST
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| A very good poem and I really enjoyed reading it and it was like I could almost feel the intensity of your love for her :) |
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Re: To what could have been, but never will.
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by polaris773 on
Monday, 2nd August 2010 @ 11:53:07 AM AEST
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| outstanding work |
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Re: To what could have been, but never will.
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by Poetry4fun on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2010 @ 02:04:08 PM AEST
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Wow I loved it!
The way every guy should feel for their girl |
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