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DANCING IN THE CLOUDS.
Contributed by
andrewjones12
on
Friday, 30th July 2010 @ 08:51:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Rays of noon hour sun
Blanket us with warm love.
It covers us whole.
In each others hold.
From the air which we breathe
Leafs flutter franticly
in the summer breeze.
A cooling offer
its shade has cast down.
Lustfully rolling over the seemingly caressing ground.
Softly speaking so silently
With our adjoining mouths.
Gravity has us physically down
But loving each other
has brought us forever higher
Dancing in the clouds.
-happy.
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andrewjones12
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2010-07-30 08:51:41]
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Re: DANCING IN THE CLOUDS.
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by cashfan1 on
Saturday, 31st July 2010 @ 03:51:01 AM AEST
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Andrew
I love the way your words paint such a vivid picture, a lovely poem superbly writen. |
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Re: DANCING IN THE CLOUDS.
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by thebadguy9999 on
Saturday, 31st July 2010 @ 03:58:27 AM AEST
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Re: DANCING IN THE CLOUDS.
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by lovingcritters on
Monday, 2nd August 2010 @ 12:47:02 PM AEST
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Once again Andrew, your titillation with words. And just like a lovely, romantic Fairy Tale.........with such a :"Happy: ending. So original, so creative......I'm a loss for words!
Marvelous again, and once again!
Warm love
consue |
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